En1320 Unit 11 Reflection Essay
Take your notes and use those to write your final draft. Here are some tips:
Introduction: Either start with a vivid description of the place, your experience, or a summary of what you are reflecting about. End with your thesis idea. Sometimes you may want to put a question first and then the answer
Example Thesis: Why was I feeling so peaceful while walking down this beach? I realized it was because the beach had always been a place of rest to me.
Body: Each of the questions you've answered can be a paragraph in the body of your essay. Take your notes and expand them. Add more details and examples from your experience and your life story.
Conclusion: Explain and expand on your thesis idea. Tell how this experience taught you something new or how it helped you to understand something. Another way to conclude is to suggest where you might like to go from this point in thinking about your thesis idea.
Example Conclusion: I sent my photo of "For Rhonda" to my friend along with a text letting her know how much I appreciate her help in letting me know that we can always find places to relax and renew in the midst of our busy lives. Now, I want to find a way to help Rhonda have a day off of her own, and I'm hoping someday we can take a trip to the beach together.
EN1320-E1 11/18/2013 Unit 9 Assignment 1 1. The general Information for Griffith Park and fictional story “Welcome to the Jungle” differ greatly, but they both describe the same place. a. The two profiles differ in terms of the details they provide by the first profile providing operating hours, history, and directions to the park while the second profile mentions it as a nature escape from city life. . b. The two profiles differ in purpose, angle, audience, and style by the first profile being written for the potential visitor; while the second profile is geared toward linking a casual reader into the story by mentioning some local spots in Los Angeles City. c. The two profiles forecast the content, angle, and style of each by the first title clearly describing the information provided. The second title is designed to relate the urban jungle to the natural wilderness. d. The organization of both stories differs by the first one providing information for potential visitors then garnering interest in the park’s history. While the second is