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Sample Compare And Contrast Essay Short Stories

Compare the short stories ‘The Birth Mark’ and ‘Battle Royal’:

There are two novels that at first glance to be totally unrelated in content and message. The first being ‘The Birth Mark’ and the second being ‘Battle Royal’. Upon looking at these two books, at first one would think them to be about as far apart as two short stories could possibly get. However, if one is to read and reflect on each in and of its own worth, yes, they are different. Then if you are to compare the two novels, there are some similarities to be found but best unearthed by the reader and not by another’s summarization, yet that is what the attempt to be made is. Then it starts to make sense.

First, the book ‘The Birth Mark’ starts off to tell a story of which broken down is basically a man’s journey into what is beautiful or perfect by all means of human nature and yet how human nature can take what one might see as beautiful or perfect and turn it into ugly or abysmal.

Secondly, when compared to the book “Battle Royal’, we again delve into a story of human nature of how one can take a difference in a human being and turn their thoughts into portraying them as something else. Something not human due to a difference it has to other humans. In this short story we are made to think that the good side of human nature will pull through in the end, yet it is held back.

Finally, when both stories are compared to the other they both seem to be presenting the same moral of the story. Both speak of human nature and how other humans can take what is beautiful by means of what others say, or in the second novel, different by means of race also as well as by what others say. So at first glimpse these books seem different, but in the end they both show their true color of humanity to those who are willing to see beyond what others say and label as beautiful or different.

In conclusion you have two stories very different in content and words written within yet are very much the same in the end message delivered by both as far as taking a look into human nature from different points of view. The conclusion between the two stories is almost like living the story yourself as it is you who make the decision on if the story is the same or different by what human nature tells the reader when comparing both.

What is a compare-contrast essay?

Have you encountered an essay prompt that directs you to compare or contrast two elements (e.g., two characters in a story, two different political theories, two different religious doctrines or scientific explanations, two different historical events, and so forth)? This is called a compare-contrast essay, and it is a form you are likely to encounter often.

Comparison essays tend to focus on similarities, while contrast essays focus on differences. Realistically, either type of essay will usually address both similarities and differences.

3 keys to a compare-contrast essay

  1. Explain precisely what you are comparing, defining terms as necessary
  2. Narrow your focus; be specific about what you are and are not comparing or contrasting
  3. Keep the comparison or contrast alive throughout the essay

Example of a compare-contrast essay question

Here is a compare/contrast essay question from Excellence in Literature’s English 3, American Literature, Module 2, considering The Legend of Sleepy Hollow and Miles Standish.

Essay prompt: Write a 750-word essay comparing and contrasting the courtship strategies of Irving’s characters, Ichabod Crane and Brom Bones, with Longfellow’s characters, Miles Standish and John Alden. Be sure to address the following issues:

  • What was each man’s strategy and how well did it work?
  • In what ways, if any, could the losing candidates have improved their chances for success?
  • How did the young ladies who were being courted communicate their preferences to the young man of their choice?
  • How did each courtship compare with an ideal courtship?
  • Optional: How did the courtships reflect the ideas and concerns of the Romantic era?
  • Be sure to use quotations from each work to support your viewpoint.

One way to approach the essay question

You could approach the multi-part question above with a graphic organizer or by charting the answers as in the table below. Just use a notebook, draw a line down the middle of a page and write in the answers to the questions below. The resulting outline can be used as a basis for the essay.

Ichabod and BromMiles and John
Courtship strategy: how did Ichabod try to show Katrina that he liked her? Give examples from the text.Courtship strategy: how did John try to show Priscilla  that he liked her? Give examples from the text.
Did it work? How do you know? Who actually won? Did it work? How do you know? Who actually won?
What made the winning man’s courtship successful? What could the losing suitor have done differently?What made the winning man’s courtship successful? What could the losing suitor have done differently?
How did Katrina show who she preferred? Were her suitors surprised?How did Priscilla show who she preferred? Were her suitors surprised?
What is an ideal courtship like? How was Ichabod’s or Brom’s courtship different from or similar to an ideal courtship (would you have wanted to be Ichabod or Brom or be courted by either of them)?What is an ideal courtship like? How was Miles or John’s courtship different from or similar to an ideal courtship (would you have wanted to be John or Miles or be courted by them)?

Establish a foundation with a thesis

A thesis statement takes a position on a debateable point. It can be a response to an essay prompt or simply a statement of a paper’s argument. In a compare-contrast essay, the thesis can either (1) state a preference for one of the two things being compared or (2) make an interpretative assertion about the differences or similarities between the two.

Example for the essay prompt above: Of the four courtship strategies employed in these two stories, the most effective ones seemed to focus on the young lady in question, and the least successful focused on the suitor himself.


Once the comparison and the basis of the argument have been defined, then you need to organize the sequence of paragraphs in the main body of the argument. In setting up the sequence of the paragraphs, you have some options, as follows:

  1. Keep the comparison alive in every paragraph, so that the argument discusses each half of the comparison in each paragraph.
  2. Alternate between the two subjects, point by point.
  3. State your entire argument for one side first, then consider the other side of the comparison.

Here is another sample outline of a compare contrast essay.

This article was adapted from the Excellence in Literature Handbook for Writers, which is available from Everyday Education, LLC (Janice Campbell’s site).


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